Avoiding Common Mistakes in College Application Essays

The college essay is a pivotal and important part of the college application process. However, many essays fall into the same traps, losing the opportunity to be great. Join us this week as we outline common mistakes in college essays, and how to avoid them.

1. Being Scattered

The best place to start when writing your essay is with an outline! Have a good idea of the direction your essay will go – make sure that your essay has a clear message about you. Avoid using your essay to write about anything and everything that is unique about you. Rather, focus on traits you can tie into a larger narrative. Less is more!

2. Cliché Topics

Topics like sports and extracurriculars can be generic. While these essays can be specific and impactful, it is easier to differentiate yourself by choosing a more unique topic. This doesn’t have to be something completely new. Your spin on the topic matters far more! Even the smallest idea can be made into a winning essay.

3. Lack of Authenticity

Stay true to yourself! Don’t write yourself out of your narrative – your essay is about you. While you want to keep in mind how the essay will come off to readers, remember that you are describing yourself. Be genuine and use your own voice to encompass your broader message.

4. Dodging the Prompt

When you are writing your personal statement you choose from a large quantity of prompts. Be intentional with this! Make sure that your essay truly fits under your prompt. Prompts are often vague and allow for plenty of creativity. When writing your outline, keep this in mind! You chose your prompt for your reason.

5. A Weak Conclusion

The conclusion is the best time to drive home your message. Identify the core message of your essay, and make sure it is clear in the conclusion. Since this is the last thing the admissions officer will read, you want to make sure that they walk away knowing why they should admit you.

6. Getting Too Much Feedback

Getting feedback from outside people is crucial. However, there is not always an objective set of criteria. Essays are inherently subjective and up to the interpretation of the reader. The purpose of someone reading over your work is to get their opinion. Remember that this is simply that – an opinion.

At the end of the day, the personal statement is a great way to make a strong and lasting impression on the admissions officer. Don’t take this lightly! Put time and effort into crafting something that is true to you, while telling admissions officers why you belong their institution. Talk to your tutor and Redwood River Academy about making this happen! Whether you’re lost, don’t know where to start, or need help refining your essay, we are here to help.